So absolutely nothing to do with Vic and Bob's silly quiz show then?
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| Author: | Swooshoman [ Tue Aug 23, 2005 2:41 am ] |
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Shooting Stars is a webtoon I am planning on creating. The name basically has nothing to do with the webtoon, but I couldn't come up with anything. Basically, it derives from the song I'm using as a theme song, which is an old lyricless melody my Dad wrote years ago, which he nicknamed "Shooting Star". So, here's basically the episode guides for Seasons One-Three, but I'll only post One for now, to see what reactions I get. I am also creating a spinoff, based on the lives of the four creators of this series (I just write the script other people do the voice acting/scoring/animation and other stuff.) Season One: #1 - TeeJay's first day at Whatup? Jr. high introduces him to not only his loyal yet unwanted companion, and his costar, Brian, but also: Ms. Crabapple, an English teacher with an evil spirit and a loathing for children; Dr. Donut, the firendly Biology teacher who happens to be a Mad Scientist; Swoosh, the quiet loner in the school; and Judy, a new crush. #2 - TeeJay does some last-minute school shopping after school to get some extra supplies, and accidnetally runs into Brian, who then follows him around the office popping out of shelves, from behind furniture, from inside a hard drive and even from out of one of the men's toilets, knocking things over and ruining the store in his wake. TeeJay, of course, gets blamed for the mess. #3 - TeeJay's mom drives him home, and TeeJay is hirrified to find Ryan in his room! TeeJay and Brian have a big quarrel, with TeeJay wanting Brian to get out immediately, but in the end, TeeJy angrily throwing a ball at Brian is taken as a game of catch, and several examples of playing ball in the house ensue, ending in trouble. #4 - The next day at school, Brian continues to follow TeeJay around, and TeeJay amkes friends with some personality-less "middle class" boys. He also starts talking to himself via a second outlet of his mind and personality appearing in physical form, because he doesn't really have a competent friend to talk to about serious stuff. #5 - TeeJay tells his almost=personalityless new friends about his secret crush on Judy Galoppa, in which they immaturely tease him and dare him to ask her out. He takes the dare, but then chickens out and tells Brian to do it for him. Brian bumblingly ends up losing track of what he was supposed to do, straying offtrack in one way or another, and ends up asking one of the nerdier girls in school. She says no, saying it would hurt her reputation. TeeJay turns into an emo child for six seocnds. #6 - TeeJay's new friends invite him to a party, which Brian follows him to without an invitation. Brian causes several antics at the party, from accidentally thinking it was a masqurade and dressing up as Garfinkle the Cat to almost drowning in the punch. #7 - This episode is from Judy Galoppa's point of view. Judy has been hanging out with the quiet loner, Swoosh, since the beginning of school and decides, after trying with no avail to strike a conversation with Swoosh, decides to find new friends and try to fit in at the school. She befriends three popular girls, making her the obligatory member of the PRE-TEEN GIRL SQUAD!!!, but longing for a more meaningful friendship than that, she also befriends Paige, the nerdy girl that Ryan had asked out for TeeJay earlier, who actually turns out to be pretty cool. Well, I ran out of time, but look for the rest of Season One, and Season 2 and 3, later on. For now, give some feedback. Do you like the series? How could I make it better? |
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| Author: | Lunar Jesty [ Tue Aug 23, 2005 3:54 am ] |
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NO WAY. The stereotypical lives of young people. I am shocked at this original concept. Really, though, couldn't you make this a little less cliche driven? Unless, of course, that's the joke and I'm missing it. |
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| Author: | Anydangway [ Tue Aug 23, 2005 7:29 am ] |
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Eh? At least change your names (Crabapple, Pre-Teen Girl Squad), so they're not infringing on any copyrights. |
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| Author: | Monaro Doorslammer [ Tue Aug 23, 2005 2:23 pm ] |
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So absolutely nothing to do with Vic and Bob's silly quiz show then?
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