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*I look down at my dashboard*



70 M.P.H.





"Gotta go a little faster if I want to beat traffic."





*Vroom*







80 M.P.H.




*shakes head*




"Not fast enough"










*VROOM*











90 M.P.H.







*Looks at watch.*




"Only 9 minutes to get there."




*VROOOM*







*Turns on radio*

"....he escaped from the local jail and has been murdering people within city limits. Police are warning people to be on the lookout for him."

"Thank you diane, we'll hear more on that story after a word from our sponsors."



"[darnit]. I alway miss the important details. I dont even know what the guy looks like. For all I know, he might be at the parking garage, waiting to kill me or something. This is why I'm not fond of serial killers."


6 minutes to go.



*VROOOOOOOM*

110 M.P.H.




"Finally, the commercials are over. Now who is this psycho?"



"Bill Storey has escaped from ferros maximum security prison. People are advised to be on the lookout...."

3 minutes.

*VROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM*

120 M.P.H.

"...he is mentally unstable and is known best for stowing away in people's backseats and killing them while they are driving..."


I heard a sound in the back seat. At this, a huge chill went through my spine.

"****"

I turn aroun to look at my back seat. There's nothing there. I look back at the road.









OH FU-

And I hit a Building.

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Alright. I like your style, seems a little bit disconnected, like we don't really know what's going on, but hey, James Bond movies always start that way, so this'll be alright.
Keep it up.

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^ Doesn't get it.

Great story Bwave.

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You dont get this opportunity when you hit a building at 120.

Thanks ace.

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Hmm......title.


Familiar?

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^OH NO U DONT THINK SO DO U???

Good job, I lol'd.

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I was thinkin' about doing something like this.

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So it was just a one shot thing?

Well in that case, it was awsome.

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I liked the end, but it was kind of abrupt.

I guess if no one else posts, A Very Abrupt will be facing


*snicker*

...A Very Abrupt End!

Great story, but I think it may have too much spacing, too much quotes, not enough detail.

It was a fine concept, just wanted to hear from the narrator a bit more.

^You don't get it, do you.

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Just stop trying. Seriously, you're making yourself look worse.

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Yeah, seriously. What's up with you lately?

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Please, please, PLEASE!

I've already been through this crap enough on RT, please to be not provoking me again, otherwise I will explode!

It's a bad enough day as it is, just...please, restrain yourself.

I lol'd so freaking hard. You win.

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Lol.

It's Buhubs!

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Oh, dude, that was awesome.

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This was posted on 8 October.

It is now 1 November.

Just because a lot of people are delaying their responses doesn't mean this isn't great.

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If I had posted during the time of COVID, COLA woulda called me worse than the virus.

I LOL'd hard.

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I agree with Buhubs. It is a good skeleton, but it could use some muscles and skin on it. Let us get to know the Narrator a little more before he hits that building.

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-Death by Chiasmus, AKA the DBX

The abrupt ending = epic.

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Bah, you'll win that whole RR thing anyways.

That's what I predict, still depends on The cup of Coffee coming back.

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If I had posted during the time of COVID, COLA woulda called me worse than the virus.

If you are going to come into this thread, and say something like this, don't.

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If you're going to come into this forum, and talk to other people like that, don't.