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 Post subject: Tommyspud's Wrestling Show, EWA
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 4:56 pm 
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Located on a seperate site, you all need to know that this does NOT abide by the guidelines of this forum, which is why I can't post it. However, I will provide a link for people who want to read the wrestling show.

I'm not the one at fault if you decide to click on the link below, and can't take swearing and violence, it's really only your own fault.

You have been warned.

http://www.freewebs.com/ewaisextreme/

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 Post subject: Re: Tommyspud's Wrestling Show, EWA
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 7:52 pm 
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Not trying to sound mean or anything, but the mentioning of the word "blood" every few seconds got old really fast; there are other ways to describe wounds. I don't even think people on WWE "bleed" that much.

I'm not too much of a fan of this, but that may be because I no longer enjoy wrestling the way I once did. The idea of a wrestling story is interesting, but it has to be executed in a proper manner in order to work out correctly. From what I've read, I'd like to suggest possibly developing it into a more novel-esque creation, with emphasis more towards back stories of the wrestlers and their desires to win instead of "he punches, he kickes, 1...2...he's up, he punches again, steel chair, 1...2...3."

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 Post subject: Re: Tommyspud's Wrestling Show, EWA
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 8:00 pm 
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Too be honest, EWA was once an E-Fed, that was played, most of the time, under hardcore stipulations. Most of the time, people bled before the matches finished.... I really don't want to do something WWE-ish, because, honestly, I think the WWE has lost it's appeal a bit since the Attitude Era.

Pretty much, the blood thing, is a thing I've had since the beginning of my match writing career.

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 Post subject: Re: Tommyspud's Wrestling Show, EWA
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This just reminds me of how fake wrestling is.

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 Post subject: Re: Tommyspud's Wrestling Show, EWA
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Choc-o-Lardiac Arrest wrote:
This just reminds me of how fake wrestling is.


Thank you for that 'thoughtful' insight....

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Tommyspud wrote:
Choc-o-Lardiac Arrest wrote:
This just reminds me of how fake wrestling is.


Thank you for that 'thoughtful' insight....

Don't you sass me.

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Choc-o-Lardiac Arrest wrote:
Tommyspud wrote:
Choc-o-Lardiac Arrest wrote:
This just reminds me of how fake wrestling is.


Thank you for that 'thoughtful' insight....

Don't you sass me.

I LOL'd.

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