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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ROUb4TfkPps

Please, if you feel so inclined, check it out. Oh! And see if you can spot all the H*R references...

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It's totally a cute little video. You should keep it up if this is the first video you've made, much less your first music video.

Constructive criticism (as someone who's just finished a year at film school, and therefore can't watch any cinematic thing without analysis): I like the cuts to the character's camera's POV a lot. In fact, it could be a little stronger if you kept riding that wave. Also of course, changing up more of the shot types can help. Experiment with camera angles, size of your subject, et cetera. Getting some more dynamic edits would help get a better flow going Of course, you're still tinkering with your style, but as you keep making videos try thinking of a logic between cuts, not just simply stringing shots together.

Or you can just disregard all that, and keep making movies without care because it's fun!

I'm Buzztootight1990 on Youtube, and I thought your film captured perfectly the idea of the original toon (whatever that was). Keep it up!

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Thanks, mikes and pop_tire. I really apprekiate the positive feedback and I'm glad you [pretended] to like my film

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I'm just gonna stop you right there. Everyone knows the "no stop complimenting me I know it's terrible." It won't work here.

Other than that, I liked the video, I actually made a music video for Experimental Film once, yours was much better.

inb4 lol contradiction

Wasnt bad, wasnt great. Deffinately (sp?) better than lots of the other crap on youtube.

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Truly living up to the "some crap" in the thread title:

Meh. I tried.

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Wrong thread.

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NEW FEATURE!! Click my signature to go to my wiki page! All my wii codes are there.

Oh yeah...oops. Delete plz.

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